Week 12 100 word challenge

As Bill drove to K.F.C/ Kids Fattening Center he got 5 buckets of chicken. After eating all the chicken, he felt really ill so he drank some Red Bull to try to feel better, but it only got worse and he fainted on the side of the road. 2 days later Bill woke up in the hospital. He looked around and he saw someone holding a huge needle, then Bill fainted again. A week later he woke up in a coffin. Bill started to panic, then Bill realised if he panics he would run out of air faster.

2 thoughts on “Week 12 100 word challenge”

  1. Hi Liam. Oh dear, what a bad time for Bill! I think there’s a few lessons for us all to learn in your story Liam! Well done, I really enjoyed reading your 100 Word Challenge.

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